So...
I'm reading Cheryl Klein's The Magic Words and doing most of the writing activities she assigns.
One of them is to write down a list of the books you wish you had written, so I started making a list. First it's a hard list to make. Second I learned something about my reading voice that correlates with my writing voice.
I would love you to chyme in and tell me a few of the books you wish you had written and if you can tell something about your writing voice based on the books you love? I had to write the list to recognize the correlation.
Here goes my list:
Picture Books
Home Place by Crescent Dragonwagon
The Kissing Hand by Audrey Penn
The Relatives by Cynthia Rylant
Sophie's Squash by Pat Z. Miller
Mostly Monsterly by Tammi Sauer
Middle Grade
Out Of The Dust by Karen Hess
With A Name Like Love by Tess Hilmo
Ice Dogs by Terry Lynn Johnson
Hatchet by Gary Paulsen
Young Adult
Caged Grave by Dianne Salerni
Dig Too Deep by Amy Allgeyer
The Boy in Striped Pajamas by John Boyne
Bread and Roses Too by Katherine Patterson
Beautiful by Amy Reed
The Book Thief by Markus Zusak
Almost all these books have a very gentle voice or tone. Someone I admire very much, Stephanie Bearce, recently told me I have a gentle writing voice. It meant so much to me that she recognized what I had hoped for since I began writing. Now I need to do what all these published authors did...submit my work until I get an acceptance.
My goals for July and August are to submit my four polished picture book manuscripts, my middle grade novel and my chapter book to at least ten publishing houses. I also want to continue working through Cheryl Klein's book and work on my YA WIP.
What are your goals for the summer?
Showing posts with label voice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label voice. Show all posts
Tuesday, June 20, 2017
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
HOW'S YOUR VOICE?
Establishing your character’s voice and carrying it through your entire manuscript can be tricky… How old is your main character? Where does he/she live? What is his/her socio-economic background? Does your character use complete sentences? What about correct grammar? Does he/she have a favorite word or phrase? Yesterday, I posted about my new favorite phrase: DON’T BE A SOUR CRACKER. Would your MC say that? I’m posting a short chapter from a beginning chapter book I’m working on…
Based on this chapter, what can you tell about David (the main character)? If you have a suggestion for a better name for my mc, I’m open to suggestions…
Chapter 3
Going in Debt
On the first day of summer vacation David asked, “Mom, can I borrow two dollars? I wanna go swimming with Tyler and I need snack money.”
“What happened to your allowance?” Mom asked.
“I took it to school yesterday. It must’ve fallen out of my pocket, cause when I got home it wasn’t there,” David said. “I promise I’ll do two dollars worth of chores when I get back from the pool.”
“Well, I guess it is the first day of summer vacation. I’ll expect you to do some chores when you get home, okay?”
“Sure, Mom, I promise I will.” David put his right hand over his heart.
David got his pool pass, a towel and two dollars and then left to meet Tyler.
The sun was bright, the sky was blue and the temperature was just perfect for swimming. David and Tyler swam and hung out at the pool all afternoon. David had a hot dog, chips and an orange soda for lunch. It was exactly two dollars. Tyler brought his lunch from home.
At 3:00 Tyler said, “I’m going to get a snack, what about you David?”
“I don’t have any money left.” David shrugged his shoulders, pulled out his empty pockets and looked at the ground.
“I’ll lend you some. I have three dollars.”
“That’s why you are my BFF. I’ll pay you back as soon as I do chores for Mom and get paid.”
Tyler got a fifty cent Kit Kat bar. David got nachos for a dollar fifty.
Tyler and David stayed at the pool until the life guards made them leave at closing time.
On the way home David said, “Let’s go swimming tomorrow, Tyler.”
“I can’t,” said Tyler. “I don’t have enough money left.”
David smiled and patted Tyler on the back., “Don’t worry, I’ll be able to pay back at least part of the money tomorrow.”
“Well, maybe I can go.”
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