Monday, May 4, 2015

Attention All Preschooler Moms, Grandmothers, and Teachers! (a book give-away)

Kim Scanlon is a certified and licensed pediatric speech language pathologist who lives and practices in New Jersey. Kim is the author of two books. MY TODDLER TALKS will help you help your child with language development. LEARNING TO READ IS A BALL is a rhyming picture book about balls with an excellent parent's guide to help you prepare your preschooler to be a lifelong reader.

Reading is the foundation for your child's future. Children who like to read do better in school. As a former teacher and as a parent, I put a lot of value on teaching reading skills to your children early in life. When my daughter was a preschooler almost everything in our house was labeled with index cards. We read to her daily and nightly. She memorized books when she was two and a half. She loved books then and still does today. (Sometimes I think she is the reason Barnes & Noble is still open.)

Kim's new book, LEARNING TO READ IS A BALL, is not only a cute rhyming picture book about all kinds of balls, but it has an amazing parent's guide in the back. You'll want to start on page one of the story, but don't! To get the most out of this book you should read the parent's guide first.

Kim gives specific techniques to help your emerging reader do more than memorize words. She gives you examples of ways to connect your child's reading and learning to their real life. Those connections increase the value of reading for your child. She shows you how to use synonyms and antonyms to improve your child's vocabulary. She even shares a lesson on how to use elaboration help your child develop his or her own stories. And if that's not enough...she guides you through phonological awareness, rhyme, alliteration and print awareness. These are all skills that will benefit your child as he or she becomes a skilled reader. LEARNING TO READ IS A BALL even has some activity pages. The parent guide  is versatile. Once you grasp the concepts, you'll be able to apply them to other books.

Learning to Read is a Ball is available on Amazon in print and a Kindle version. It is also available at Barnes and Noble. Kim has a wonderful website full of insight on speech and language.

Kim also has a website specifically for My Toddler Talks.  My Toddler Talks can be purchased on Amazon.

You can learn more about Kim, her books, and her services on Facebook and Twitter.

If you would like to be entered to win a copy of Learning to Read is a Ball please tell me if you are a mom, a grandmother, a teacher, a caregiver, an aunt or uncle of a preschooler who would benefit from Kim's book. ( will choose a winner on May 7th and Kim will send him or her a signed copy.)

Please show Kim some book love and tweet about her new book.

Friday, March 6, 2015

And The Winner Is...

Thanks so much to everyone who shared or read my last post. I can't stress how important it is to do your research on agents and publishing houses before you commit to them.

Drum roll....

The winner of the 2015 Guide To Literary Agents is (chosen by Carrie Charley Brown! Congratulations, Carrie and please email me your address.

I hope everyone has a wonderful weekend!

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Agent Research and Querying, plus an Awesome Giveaway...

Sometimes, you think a book is so valuable that you buy two copies....Which gives me the opportunity to either go through the hassle of trying to return it, or having an awesome giveaway. So you guessed it...

I'm giving away one copy of the 2015 Guide To Literary Agents.

If you know me, you know I a HUGE proponent of doing your research, no matter what it's for.  For the past month or so I've been researching agents. Before I began, I created a list of the places I would look at to research each potential agent. My checklist looked like this:

  • Agent’s name and agency website
  • @twitter
  • Writer’s Digest Blog information
  • GLA (Guide to Literary Agents)
  • Publisher’s Marketplace likes and dislikes
  • Blog accounts
  • Facebook 
  • Interview information
  • Editors and Predators, Writer Beware and Absolute Writer (the Water Cooler)
  • Do a Google Search
Feel free to copy and paste my list, so you have it for future reference...

I created a document with the above information. Once each agent checked out,  (and not all of them did) I personalized the query, based on my research, and copied their submission guidelines and email address into their query/document. Being organized is key here! Whether you do it on paper, in a spreadsheet or on a file folder. Keep track of who you query and when you query them (leave space for a response, too). 

Every agent has specific guidelines you have to follow. Don't fool yourself into thinking it won't matter if you send them the whole manuscript, when they ask for ten, fifteen or fifty pages... It does matter. The rules are there for a reason. Be sure to follow them to the very best of your ability. This is your introduction to them. Show them that you are paying attention to what they want.

I would suggest if you are querying a novel or a non-fiction work, that you make several submission packages, so that you can easily adapt to each agents requirements. Some agents accept attachments and some want your letter and your submission in the body of an email.  So pay attention to HOW they want to see your work. 

Putting your best foot forward is like having the perfect handshake. Not too soft. Not too strong. Not too sweaty. Just right...

If you would like to win a copy of the 2015 Guide to Literary Agents, please pop over to my website,  click on one of the social media links and say something about my services or my site and leave a comment on this post. 

For my non querying friends....Our babies are happy and loving the new house.

Please come back on March the 6th to see who won the copy of the 2015 Guide to Literary Agents and to join in on a discussion on rejections.

Friday, January 30, 2015

And The Winner Is...

Connie Arnold was chosen by to win a copy of Martha Ramirez's book BROKEN HEART. Congratulations, Connie!

If you didn't win a copy and would still like one you can go here to purchase a copy.

Saturday, January 17, 2015

From a broken heart to... a BROKEN HEART and a giveaway

Do you remember when Angela Ackerman asked us to help her friend Martha Ramirez? She was going to have heart surgery for a birth defect. Angela asked us to send her cards or heart things, or just send her some words from your heart.

Because Angela is such an amazing caring woman, a large number of us responded to her request.

After Martha recovered from her surgery, she reached out to me (maybe more than just me) and we became friends.

I had the privilege of helping her working on her book, BROKEN HEART this past year. I think it is a wonderful book, for if you have a sibling or even a cousin in the hospital for any disease or illness. It has coloring pages at the end of the book, lots of links for information about heart diseases and disorders. It even has a spot for the child to write or draw about his or her special memories.

I'd love to see this book in pediatric and cardiologist waiting rooms. Such a helpful book.

I'm going to give away a copy of BROKEN HEART on January 30th. (PS: I'm in the acknowledgements! If you are looking for a freelance editor my site is:

Did you join in in Hearts for Martha? Did you connect with her afterwards? I feel so blessed to have her as a heart. Though she had a broken heart, she has a very tender caring, now fixed, heart.

If you would like to win a copy of BROKEN HEART please join my blog and please tell me of a time you had a broken heart...

If you don't win a copy and would still like one you can go here to purchase a copy.

Happy 2015! I hope all your dreams come true!

Saturday, December 20, 2014

And The Manuscript Maven Winners Are...

The winners of my editorial services are entry number 32 Romelle Broas , 25Deirdre Englehart , and 9 Debra Daugherty. Congratulations! I can't wait to see what you send me!

Each winner can chose either a free picture book critique and line edit, a chapter one of a novel critique and line edit, or a query critique and line edit.

Please email me your choice of prizes in an attachment using word.

If you didn't win my services, but are interested in working with me, I will line edit first seven pages of a novel for free. This gives us both the opportunity to decide if I'm the right person to work with you on a particular novel. Please check out my website The Manuscript Maven or my Facebook Page for more information about my services.

Thanks for all the support you guys are giving me. My love for editing and coaching is genuine and it is a pleasure to be a part of any writer's journey.

Thursday, November 6, 2014

Ta Da! Plus Three Critique Prizes!

 I don't know if you've noticed, but I'm trying to look a little more businesslike.  There's a reason for that...

If you'll recall, I spent a lot of time this year critiquing/editing/and coaching writers. I seriously considered working for a literary agency, but one of the things I learned is that literary agents never have an ending point. Yes, when they sell a book and it gets through the publishing stage they only have to worry about marketing that book, right? Well, not exactly. They do an amazing amount of work.

Here are just a few of the things I observed:

  • Reading submissions (invited submissions and slush)
  • Evaluating submissions
  • Connecting with writers
  • Recruiting submissions via social media
  • Critiquing
  • Editing
  • Coaching authors on social media, marketing, book tours
  • Networking with other agents
  • Networking with editors
  • Trying to find the right editors for the right manuscripts
  • Negotiating contracts
  • Marketing books and authors
  • Speaking at Conferences
  • Marketing themselves
  • Keeping current with the market 
  • Advising and communicating with current authors
I'm sure there are lots of other things that I wasn't privy to. It was an overwhelming amount of work. So, if you have an agent be grateful for all of their hard work and if you are looking for an agent, be patient and understand the amount of work they are doing. It is NOT a 9-5 job!

I did gain some perspective, along with a lot of new writing friends. I LOVE LOVE LOVE editing and critiquing. It's a great feeling to help someone move their manuscript forward or to help them write a query that catches someone's attention. I love having a beginning and ending point with each project I undertake. Not that I don't continue thinking about people's manuscripts. I don't know how many times I've sent someone an email starting with: I was just thinking about your manuscript....

This experience led me to where I am today. I'm launching my own website offering my services for manuscript critiques, line edits, query critiques, and general coaching. I hope you will pop over and check out The Manuscript Maven. If you have any feedback or suggestions to improve my site, please leave them in the comments.

To celebrate, I'm offering one free picture book critique or line edits and critique for one chapter of your novel or one query critique. The winners will be picked by on December 19th. Please leave what genres you write in the comments.

Thanks for stopping in and I hope you are having a lovely Fall!

(If you are inclined, I'd appreciate it if you would share my good news...)

Monday, October 20, 2014

Where's Lenny Lee Birthday Bash!

 Guess who is turning 15 today? Can you believe it? It's hard to believe we've been here with Lenny since March of 2010. If you want to check out his first ever blog post you can go here!  I met Lenny in May when I was very sad. My beautiful cat Stripes passed away. I stayed in bed for almost two weeks, just looking for moral support in blogland.  I found some at Brian's Home and that's where I met Lenny. He was such an amazing support to me in a hard time. Our friendship grew and now he is one of my most trusted critique partners and friends. My silver lining to Stripes passing away was finding Lenny.

I talk to Lenny about once a month. Did you know he's gotten taller? And his voice has even changed? His writing style remains the same, but the quality of his posts are better. But I've noticed something, he's kind of been missing from blogland and I don't know about you, but I miss his words of wisdom and his sunshine in people's comments.

Several people have said the same thing, "Where's Lenny Lee?" So I invited them to help me celebrate Lenny's birthday and to let him know how much we miss him in blogland. I know school is harder and some days are worse than others for you, Lenny, but I think if you would spend a little time back on line with your friends you might feeling better. Plus, you would make us all feel better because you seem to say the exact right thing at the exact right time to so many of us.

We love you Lenny and we miss seeing your smiling face in blogland. So maybe, for your fifteenth birthday, you could give us a gift and come back to see us. WE MISS YOU!

Love and hugs from blom

Here are a few blog friends that are missing you and would like you to visit their blogs so they can tell you how special you are to them and so they can wish you a Happy Birthday.

Robyn Campbell
SA Larsen
Shannon Odonnell
Dianne Salerni
Susanne Drazic
Martha Ramirez
Kelly Polark
Sherrie Petersen
Melissa Sarno
Jemi Fraser
Lydia Kang
Jessica Bell
Candace Ganger
Hilary Melton-Butcher
Joanne Fritz
Brian Frum
Jenny Matlcok
Natalie Arguirre
Laura Diamond
Connie Arnold
Lola Sharp
Janet Johnson
Len Lambert
Leigh Moore
Sally Odgers
Matt Rush

Happy Birthday to my dear Blon! (PS: red is a birthday hint)

Matt r

Wednesday, October 1, 2014

When To Hire An Editor or When To Throw In The Towel

When To Hire An Editor or When To Throw In The Towel

  • You've written a complete first draft.
  • You've checked for plot holes, grammar, spelling and usage errors.
  • You've double checked all your seeds of truth in your manuscript.
  • You've traded manuscripts with your critique partners.
  • You've revised based on each critique partners suggestions.
  • You've read your manuscript out loud from beginning to end and made more revisions.
  • You've entered contests, gone to conferences, and gotten feedback.
  • You've revised some more.
  • You queried and got form letter rejections.
  • You revised again and are quite sick of your manuscript and want to throw it away...

But throwing your baby away isn't an option. You've invested so much time and energy into it. So what's the next step?

Ask yourself, is this manuscript worth investing in? Do you have the funds to invest in it?  If the answer is yes, you should start thinking about hiring an editor. If the answer is no, it's time to put this manuscript away and start on something new.

Then you have to ask yourself how much do you have to invest in your manuscript?  The amount you pay will  depend on your budget and the editor's skill set, experience and name. You can spend a lot or a little. Ask around before you choose an editor. There are lots of options: literary agent interns, published writers (published in magazine), retired editors, people who just love the editing process, published authors, and other writers. Find out who they've edited for and if they were helpful. Did they move the manuscript forward to publication or positive feedback from agents or publishing houses?

Before you commit to paying an editor, ask yourself if you're willing to take advice on your manuscript? If you aren't willing to make changes or listen to advice, you shouldn't spend the money. If you have an open mind and are willing to listen to suggestions, you believe in your story so much that you have a burning need to published it, and you have some money saved to pay an editor then it's time to start looking around for an editor.

Have you hired an editor? How helpful was it?

***permission to be printed in the ISWG Anthology

Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Winner Winner, Chicken Dinner! (Snatched in Gullybrook by Kim Van Sickler)

 And the winner...

Chosen by


Brian! (Please email me your address.)
Thanks for everyone who showed Kim some extra love by voting for her story or tweeting about her book.

I'm going to be absent from Blogland until November. Our lives have been topsy turvy since June. Our daughter started college in August. It has and continues to give us some serious challenges, as she is eight hours away. The same week we took her to college my brilliant husband was transferred, so I'm in the middle of buying and selling a house too. Last month I began working on a project that is going to fill my heart with joy, but all the challenges in our lives right now made me realize I can't manage it right now. Once our house is listed and a new one is purchased I'll have more freedom and be able to share my cool news.